a good start
a good sense of drama... maybe a few seconds too long.. but in this day of quick fixes... let 'em wait a bit! ....and it all makes a pretty good point. look forward to seeing it evolve.
btw. thanks for the kind words today before jen's day got canned. my girl put a lot of sweat into it and laughed herself to sleep most nights after working on it. honestly.... if you love your own work, who gives a *$%#! if others don't get it. but she's glad you did!
keep up the great work!